The joys and travails of e-authors Sherry (Shara) Jones and Laura Hamby as they jump computer monitors first into the pool. Holding hands and plugging their noses, of course.

Tuesday, September 4, 2007

Taking shape....

Laura: Yes, as I admitted in the guest post intro, Jennie’s method scared the panster in me into a curled up mass of whimpering writer. I mean, this takes organizational skills (if you could see my desk, you’d understand that “organizational skills” is a foreign concept to me.). This takes more colored paper than I have on hand. This takes printer ink. (Guess what I managed to forget again today, on my trip to Wally World? G’wan. Guess. You’ll never get it. Heh.)

So, the other night, as we drove to watch a minor league baseball game (the home team was... well, in a word... trounced. The only reason we stayed ‘til the end was for the fireworks, but I digress...)...Where was I?

Oh, yeah, so there I am, without a computer, a laptop or even any caveman tools (notebook and pen), and I started thinking about my current WIP. I’m on chapter four, and it just wasn’t working for me the way I was trying to take it, and I KNEW it was wrong, but couldn’t quite see a way to fix it.

“Try thinking just about the hero’s arc,” said a little mutant voice in the back of my head.

So I did.

Wow.

Let me just say, when I focused in on what my hero wants and needs to do, I saw several things unfolding: the heroine’s BIG conflict, and how his actions will contribute to... get this... the BLACK MOMENT! Yes! (Panster does a li’l victory dance here, because the BM’s don’t usually unfold this early in the story for me.) I can *see* where this story needs to go, what needs to happen in order to fuel all the conflicts and growth necessary towards bringing this couple together.

I’ll admit, I didn’t use the color coding method when I finally got my hands on caveman tools, but I got my points written down, and will have them on hand as I finish writing this story. And Sherry’s fainted from the shock of my announcement via IM: “I’ll have you knows, that I used a portion of Jennie’s method... well, in my noggin, on the way to the b-ball game, and wound up PLOTTING some of my hero’s arc for the WIP.”

I’m excited about the direction I discovered this story would take, and I don’t feel like I’ve traded sides here, and gone to pitch for the Plotters, either. Nope.

I’m still firmly planted in the Panster’s dugout.



Sherry: Here I sit with my stash of colored paper and find myself also sans printer ink. (whimper). I will be rectifying that lil oversight posthaste.

Not that the need for the printing part of Jennie’s method is anytime near for me. I still have to do the identification portion. And I will. As I might have mentioned before, I have the perfect, most imperfect story just begging to be scrambled into pretty colored strips.

In the meantime, as I pondered the methodology involved, I also began to mentally focus on yet another story that I have brewing. Using Jennie’s method, I began to “think” the story into the appropriate colored sections. Being only in the beginning stages of the story, this was fairly easy to do.

Right away, I could tell where I needed to concentrate my efforts. How exciting!

Keep checking back as I begin using Jennie’s Big Breakdown method. The plotter in me is simply all-atwitter to begin. I’ve read Jennie’s books and I know how well plotted and executed her stories are.

Go find out for yourself if you haven’t already.

Now, off to get that ink!

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

So pleased you've both got something out of my method. Even if Laura did call me a "little mutant voice in the back of her head" -- ROFLOL!!!

Smooches,

Jennie

Laura Hamby said...

Hmmm... that doesn't sound so nice! Wasn't what I was thinkin' at all at the time I wrote it, but yanno, that voice did have a bit of an Aussie accent, Jennie... ;)

Hugs and smooches,

~Laura

Anonymous said...

Heh. Now I need to take some of my own advice and get on with the new story. I bought coloured markers as the store today. Happened upon a package with the same colours in it as my colours of paper.

Jennie
Stationery addict

Laura Hamby said...

Bwahahaha, Jennie. Maybe you and Sherry could form a stationery addicts support group. ;-)

~Laura
Gel pen addict

Anonymous said...

Had to go to Bunnings yesterday to buy a storage crate. Guess what's right near it? Office Works. Had the DD with me. I may have resisted on my own, maybe, but the DD wanted to go in. We came out with $65 AUD worth of stuff between us. Oops.

Jennie
Who how has a pack of ten spiral notepads among other things.

Anonymous said...

Er, that would be 'now' not 'how'.

Sigh. Monday-itis.

Jennie

Laura Hamby said...

Have I won the lottery yet, Jennie?
GGG.

Anonymous said...

Sadly, Monday in Aus did not report any known lottery winnings for you, Laura. Or for me, either.

Jennie
Now enjoying Tuesday, if doing tax stuff can be considered 'enjoying'.